Thursday, 24 September 2015

Optimist Yachting Quick Write

“AHHHH”, I'm hitting the edge of the boat, it’s a storm!!
Mia looks at the storm.
“ Oh no”, I shout to Violet.
“ Duck Mia the booms coming”, says Violet.
Mia ducks.
“ Few”, says Mia looking happy.
The sail flys off.
“ Violet I thought you put the sail on properly”, says Mia.
“ I did Mia”, says Violet.
“ Well, we need to get back to land”,says Mia.
The waves swirl round and round.
Mia and Violet are safe on land.

By Mia.

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